SPF – The Imposter

SPF – The Imposter

Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly challenge to write a 200-word story based on a photo prompt.  Thanks to C.E. Ayr, long-time member of the Sunday Photo Fiction community for this weeks intriguing photo.

SPF July 1 2018 (1 of 1)
Photo credit; C.E Ayr

The old church stood in a part of town called The Paseo, home to every wanna-be painter this side the Red River. Inside, I was greeted by a woman of innumerable years and teeth yellowed from too much tobacco. We exchanged pleasantries as she led me to the first gallery. Every painting had a story. She was a wealth of knowledge, this one, but none of it interested me.

“Tell me your story,” I said.

“No story,” eyes darting from side to side. “Just an old woman with a gallery.”

That, I doubted.

I asked to see her work, so she led me to a small backroom. I’m no art critic, but I knew bad art when I saw it. A brilliant deception I might add.

“Where are the abstracts?”

No abstracts she professed.

I said I was no art critic, but I am an art detective and I was running out of patience. For years I had searched for the missing Picasso. Not a painting, but a forger; the best in the world. I knew in my gut she was standing two feet away.

“Let’s cut to the chase,” I said. “How much to forge Les Demoiselles d’Avignon?”

Word count  = 199








25 thoughts on “SPF – The Imposter

    1. Keith wrote an excellent piece where the number was front and center. I chose to make it a backdrop only. So many interpretations !

      1. thanks and I found it on the link up = sorry _ I forgot SPF had the linkup and just added my entry there too


  1. I have seen a few shows about forgers (in real life0 and this had a nice ring of realism even more for me because I saw those shows…

    and I really like this line:

    “Just an old woman with a gallery.”

      1. you are so right – the word limit brings out some nice denseness
        and is partly what I love about flash fiction

  2. Dicey… finding just the right forger.
    You reminded me of a show I used to watch called “Remington Steel” maybe that was just the character… took his name from the razor he used to shave his face. 😉

    1. I remember the show but don’t think I watched it. Most stories end up reminding us of something. Hopefully in a good way. Thanks for commenting Jules

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