Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly challenge to write a 200-word story based on a photo prompt. This week’s photo is courtesy of SPF contributor, Joy Pixley (thanks Joy!). Not to give anything away, but don’t the cacti look somewhat human?
Madeline contemplated Derek’s crushed skull. As first dates go, this one sucked. Exploring an Arizona ghost town in the middle of nowhere appealed to Madeline’s thrill-seeking nature. However, Derek’s sense of adventure left much to be desired and by 2:00 p.m., Madeline insisted he take her home.
They had not traveled far down the dusty trail before the pop of a blown tire broke their silence. An apologetic Derek confessed he did not have a spare.
With only five miles to a major road, Madeline convinced Derek they should walk. With any luck, they would reach the highway before dark.
Luck, it seemed, was on holiday. The 100-degree heat and Derek’s lack of stamina slowed her down. The last thing Madeline wanted was to spend the night in the desert.
A large rock to the head solved her problem.
Madeline grabbed the near-empty canteen and headed out. As twilight approached, she detected something in the distance; an automobile parked along the road. Convinced she was saved, Madeline, chugged the remaining water, and raced toward the car.
As the last rays of light faded, relief turned to terror. The car she saw was Derek’s.
15 thoughts on “Destination: Survival”
Whoa, freaky stuff here, Susan.
Lots of questions, but I’m too feart to ask them!
You made me laugh, CE. I will take fear and freaky as a good sign.
Oh I love it!!! I always say- Turnabout is fair play!!!!!!
Karma is a bitch, isn’t she LOL
A great story to finish the year on. I enjoyed it Susan
Thanks Michael. I’m glad you liked it
Oh dear, Maddy has a bit of a problem methinks! I hope you have a happier New Year than she’s going to have.
Assuming she even has a new year. But I plan on having a great one. Have a happy new year yourself!
This is certainly not Madeline’s day. Everything she is trying to do is coming into a naught. Derek is also not right for an adventure seeking girl like her. What an odd couple indeed.
At least they figured it out on their first date. Think of what things would have been like if they married! Thanks for commenting A.R. Have a Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to you and your family in 2019.
Oooooooh, that was scary. I loved how she bumped off Derek in such a matter-of-fact manner.
Like taking out the trash, right?
Madeline seems to be in a bit of trouble now.
That she is Madeline!